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Pounding Cloth | 搗衣 1 |
- Qingshang mode: 2 6 1 2 3 5 6 1; with Qing Shang Diao as modal prelude | Dao Yi |
Tang ladies pounding silk cloth 3 |
Although musically unrelated, both the 1539 Dao Yi Qu and the 1589 Dao Yi have lyrics, with some overlap. The first Dao Yi without lyrics is the version of the present melody published in 1634. However, there is still the possibility that instrumental versions existed prior to the ones with lyrics, with lyrics added later (and the melody presumably modified accordingly); see also below. Exploring this possibility should begin with a comparison of the 1589 version with the early versions without lyrics that followed it.
Versions of Dao Yi are often attributed to "Pan Tingjian of the Tang dynasty", a person who has not yet been identified.8 Although usually called simply Dao Yi, other titles have also been used including Autumn Waters Melody (Qiushui Nong9), occasionally Autumn Waters Melody (Qiuchu Nong11), and on at least one recording 長安一片月 Moon Chang'an Yi Pian Yue.12) Other thematically related titles can also be found in some old melody lists, including Hearing Pounding on an Autumn Evening (Qiuye Wen Zhen).13 Nothing is known of the music that was associated with the earlier titles.
Whereas versions of the musically unrelated earlier song Dao Yi Qu occur in only one handbook, dated 1539, versions of the present qingshang mode Dao Yi can be found in at least 22 handbooks from 1589 to the present.14 Qingshang tuning is the same as guxian: from standard tuning raise the 2nd, 4th and 7th strings half a tone each. Interestingly, Dao Yi shares at least one interesting motif with what is perhaps the most famous guxian melody, Qiu Hong.15
Also, although this later melody is unrelated musically to the 1539 Dao Yi Qu, it uses the 1539 lyrics as lyrics for its Sections 11 and 12, with a short addition in the middle. At least five later handbooks use a version of these longer lyrics. Nevertheless, even these versions with lyrics may work also as purely instrumental melodies - perhaps better - and it is difficult to say how their being paired with lyrics affected the actual melodies.16
There has been some suggestion that the qingshang melody has the flavor of flower drum songs (huagu ge) from northwest China (Shanxi and Shaanxi provinces in particular).17 However, to my knowledge no one other than myself has reconstructed any of the early versions of the qingshang mode Dao Yi, something that would be necessary if one is either to confirm this as a historical possibility or shed light on early forms of huagu ge. From its current rhythms it is difficult to imagine the modern version sung with lyrics, in particular lyrics such as those of 1589 that are paired according to the standard pairing method. (See below for some specific comments on pairing notes with the note runs at the beginning of several sections.)
Further on pairing: the modern interpretation of the note runs at the beginning of several sections is to play them as individual notes rather than as a quick run. In 1589 these notes are not paired against characters, suggesting they may well have been played quickly rather than as individual notes. However, in my recording I play them as a slow note run (further).
The version of this title most commonly played today is said to have developed from the qingshang version found in the Mei'an Qinpu (1931).18 There are several recordings available.
There is also yet another surviving Dao Yi melody. It uses huangzhong tuning (from standard tuning lower the first string and raise the fifth), has eight sections and has been transcribed as played by Long Qinfang,19 supposedly from the "Qianshi Shicao", a handbook dated from 1880, the melody does not seem actually to be there.20
Qingshang Modal Prelude (清商調 Qingshang Diao) 21
The 1609 edition of Zhenchuan Zhengzong Qinpu includes near the end a melody (qin song) called Qingshang Diao. Although the title does not directly indicate it is a modal prelude (no "意 yi"), it clearly is one. For several reasons it seems to work best as a modal prelude to Dao Yi, and so it is treated here as such. It did not occur in 1589, and in 1609 it had no commentary. Its lyrics, translated below seem, to appear here for the first time (comment).
Preface
22
The original preface in Yang Lun Taigu Yiyin begins as follows
Music: Qingshang Melody and Pounding Cloth
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The melody in Yang Lun Taigu Yiyin (both 1589 and 1609) is arranged into 12 sections; sections 1 and 8 are in harmonics. The
abovementioned melody Qingshang Diao (a qin song) works well as a prelude to Dao Yi and so is included here before the listing of Dao Yi section titles. To hear them together, first open both sound files in separate windows:
00.00 (尾聲泛音 closing harmonics)
00.11
商秋,金風落葉也,草木含愁,
Shāngqiū; jīn fēng luò yè yě, cǎo mù hán chóu,
Autumn! Golden breezes, falling leaves, vegetation holds sadness.
宋玉作賦實悲秋。
Sòng Yù zuò fù shí bēi qiū.
Song Yu wrote a rhapsody truly Mourning Autumn.
翱翔兮鴻鴈,萬里任遨遊。
Áo xiáng xī hóng yàn, wàn lǐ rèn áo yóu.
Soaring above are the wild geese; over thousands of miles they must roam.
傷心事,問閨人也知否。
Shāng xīn shì, wèn guī rén yě zhī fǒu.
For bitter affairs of the heart, they ask the lady of the boudoir whether she knows.
心憂,一氣無私不自由,
Xīn yōu, yī qì wú sī bù zì yóu,
Heartsick, at once no self, no freedom.
01.00
(泛起)月明砧杵也韻悠悠。 (Compare 1525b, below)
Yuè míng zhēn chǔ yě yùn yōu yōu.
(Closing harmonics) Under the bright moon the block and pestle resound long and sad.
End: 01.20
00.00 1. Moved by fate, thoughts overflow
00.37 2. To the moon expressing emotion
01.32 3. Sound sent off into the distance
02.12 4. Wafting emotions go out continuously
02.45 5. As the season changes clothing is passed on
03.21 6. Dreams of the frontier gates
04.05 7. Through seasons the sadness of separation
04.49 8. Venturing a sigh at the separation of the morning and evening stars
05.15 9. The northern frontier is bitterly cold
05.58 10. Hating spring mountain disasters
06.45 11. Sending off requisite clothing
07.40 12. Holding back her grief within the Unicorn Chamber
08.05 (harmonic closing, still with lyrics)
08.23 (melody ends)
One can also listen to Dao Yi Qu as a prelude, even though it uses a different tuning.
Footnotes (Shorthand references are explained on a
separate page)
1.
Pounding Cloth (搗衣 Dao Yi)
This tablature is #28 in Yang Lun Taigu Yiyin (QQJC VII/129ff).
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2.
Qingshang Mode (清商調 Qingshang Diao)
The relative tuning for this mode, 6 1 2 3 5 6 1 , is achieved either by raising the 2nd, 4th and 7th strings, or lowering 1st, 3rd, 5th and 6th strings. The tuning is
introduced under
Shenpin Guxian Yi. Another name is Jiazhong.
I do not know of any studies attempting to make modal distinctions within this tuning. The present Dao Yi is very strongly a do - so mode piece, with 1 the primary tonal center and 5 the secondary tonal center.
For more how this mode fits into qin modes in general also see Modality in early Ming qin tablature.
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3.
Image of Pounding Cloth (搗衣圖)
This image seems to show ladies, as part of a process of preparing silk, pounding the thread or cloth to soften the fiber: they apparently are not washing it. The image is part of a longer scroll with the short title 搗練圖 Dao Lian Tu. Daolian today means "engaged in work", but "lian" originally referred to raw unfinished silk, hence the title "Ladies Preparing Newly Woven Silk". The painting has three panels showing Tang dynasty ladies performing several household tasks related to sericulture. This one is on the right side of the painting. The original, attributed to the Tang dynasty painter 張萱 Zhang Xuan (fl. 714–742), is lost; the present painting, attributed to Song emperor Huizong, is in the Boston Museum of Fine Arts.
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4.
Washing clothes?
This sort of re-interpretation gained popularity after 1949, when it became important to find connections between guqin and "the masses".
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5.
搗衣曲 1539 Dao Yi Qu
Standard tuning, one section. Its lyrics are almost the same as the lyrics of Dao Yi Sections 11 and 12, but there is no apparent musical relationship.
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6.
Rough fiber
Hemp (葛布 gebu) is not specificially mentioned; section 7 says something about material (not yet translated). My thanks to 李恨冰 Li Henbing for this suggestion as well as for other help with various other aspects of this page.
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7.
The singer
Compare Mulberry Lane, where the singer brags of her powerful husband. Note also that images in literati paintings of fishermen usually show them as gentlemen leisurely lounging on a boat. Or images such as that of the woodcutter Ziqi listening to Boya play qin
(q.v.).
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8.
Pan Tingjian 潘廷堅 (or 潘庭堅)
Commentary in Yang Lun Taiyu Yiyin begins, "按斯曲,乃唐人潘廷堅所作....As for this melody, it is by Pan Tingjian of the Tang dynasty"(QQJC VI). This name, as well as the name 潘庭堅, also pronounced Pan Tingjian but written with a different "ting", is often mentioned in the melody introductions, but none of the compilers seems to have made any effort to identify who this person might have been.
Regarding the first, Pan Tingjian (潘廷堅 Bio/xxx; 18737.xxx), I have not been able to find any information about anyone of this name, whether or not from the Tang dynasty. 9792.77 廷堅 Tingjian is given as a style name or nickname for several people, but none with the surname 潘 Pan. (Note that it is a later usage for 唐人 3714.3 simply to mean "Chinese person".)
As for the second Pan Tingjian (潘庭堅 Bio/2527; 18737.132), although some later versions make the attribution to him, these still say he is Tang dynasty, and so far the only relevant historical records I have found to anyone of this latter name are to two people from the 12th to 14th centuries. One is a 潘庭堅 Pan Tingjian (18737.132), 字叔聞 style name Shuwen, said to be Yuan/Ming; there is some evidence that this Pan, a scholar associated with Zhu Yuanzhang, may have played qin but there is nothing to connect him to this melody or the lyrics. The other reference is to a Pan Fang 潘牥 18737.98 (Bio/2519), style name 庭堅 Tingjian, but his dates are 1205-1246 and, though a scholar official, is not credited in the bio entries with any music or poetry. (9553.58 庭堅 Tingjian has no one else named Pan.)
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9.
Autumn Waters Melody (秋水弄 Qiushui Nong; also Qiu Shui Nong; compare Qiuchu Nong)
Qiushui Nong, in addition to being an alternate title for later
Dao Yi, has also been used as an
alternate title for the musically unrelated 1525 version of
Yueshang Cao (the one using guxian tuning, not the version using standard tuning). There may be more justification for this as an alternate title here than there, as the words 秋水 qiu shui can be found both in introductions and lyrics for Dao Yi.
Zha Guide also lists Qiu Shui as the name of a melody in five handbooks beginning with the Huiyan Mizhi (1647), where it is said to have as an alternate title Shenhua Qu, mentioned here under Shenhua Yin. Meanwhile at least one Song dynasty list says it was also called Yun Zhu Ji (compare Yun Zhu Ta).
Nevertheless, 25505.27 秋水 qiu shui, although it has many meanings, none is related to any of the themes here. 25505.28 to .36 also seem to have no connection.
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11.
Qiuchu Nong 秋杵弄 (Autumn Pestle Melody)
25505.xxx A 杵 chu is specifically a pestle (club) used for pounding cloth; see block and club. To my knowledge his title is not found in any of the old melody lists. It is used as a title for
Dao Yi in 1670.
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12.
Chang'an Yi Pian Yue 長安一片月 (A sliver of moon over Chang'An)
Title used for a melody in a recording by Xia Lianzhu from the 1950s. There the brief comment says, "樊君抄本 hand copy of Mr. Fan"; see "長安一片月,萬戶擣衣聲。", a line from the version by Li Bai of the poem
子夜吳歌 Ziye Wu Ge. However, this melody does not seem to have anything to do with the qin melody connected to that poem, instead being a version of 擣衣/搗衣 Dao Yi.
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13.
Qiuye Wen Zhen 秋夜聞砧 On an Autumn Evening Hearing Pounding (on Stone)
This melody (25505.134xxx; 29749.xxx), the title of which may refer to cloth being pounded, seems to survive only in the same early Ming
melody list mentioned above. Could it be related to one of the Dao Yi?
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14.
Tracing 搗衣 Dao Yi and 搗衣曲
Daoyi Qu)
Zha Guide 15/162/356 combines both titles, but the first, the Daoyi Qu published in 1539 (shang mode; one section), is in fact musically unrelated to the rest (mostly called Dao Yi but also Qiushui Nong and Qiuchu Nong), which are in qingshang mode [raise 2nd 5th and 7th strings]; some have lyrics; all are in 12 sections).
The Zha Guide entry lists the qingshang mode Dao Yi as surviving in 21 handbooks from 1589 up through 1931 (Mei'an Qinpu), with six having lyrics. It seems to have been particularly popular in the 19th century. These are as follows:
Examining the above reveals that there is considerable variety among the versions of this melody, the melody has several different names (for versions [also] called Qiushui Nong see below as well as Zha's Guide 15/162/356), and the name of the mode often changes. However, all of the above seem to be related, and many prefaces have the same attribution to Pan Tingjian. (One exception: the Huangzhong mode Dao Yi.)
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15.
Shared motif with Qiu Hong
This 7-note motif ( 6 6 1 1̅ 2 1 1̅ ) is hinted at in Dao Yi 1589 Section 1 (end) then occurs in its full form at the end of Sections 8 and 12 (end of piece).
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16.
Pairing lyrics and music: how did they influence each other?
The origins of qin melodies is a major unanswered question. Sometimes they are called "compositions", as though specifically written by a single person. Most surviving tablature probably reflects melodies evolved through play by one or more masters, over time, then were transcribed, and if popular often revised, by masters or students. Mention has been made above of the idea that Dao Yi has its origins in flower drum songs. The 1589 version, with lyrics, seems (from my own attempts at reconstruction) as though it could be primarily an instrumental melody, with lyrics added later. But how was the pairing actually done? The
standard pairing method reminds one of the pairing of ci lyrics. And just as pairing according to ci patterns might be done impromptu at an elegant gathering, perhaps the same could have been done with Dao Yi. On the other hand, could someone have improvised such music to fit the lyrics? To evaluate such possibilies one must take into account the fact that in some places the pairing of words and music seems quite awkward, and the quality of the lyrics may not be particularly high. In addition, quite likely there would have been modifications made during the process of writing the result down.
Several specific aspects of the melody may be relevant here. First, the lyrics of Sections 11 and 12 of the 1589 edition can be found in the melodically unrelated version of 1539, perhaps suggesting that the lyrics came first. In addition, several sections include couplets structured 7+7x2: was this inspired by some aspect of the music in those spots? For some of these the music seems to form a corresponding musical couplet, but for others this is not so evident. Furthermore, the awkward connection of lyrics and music in certain places, in particular with the note runs at the beginning of Sections 2 and 9, perhaps suggests that the lyrics were at least in some places rather casually paired to the music: if it was the music being created for existing lyrics, one might expect a better pairing. Or perhaps this suggests that the 1589 version was created by modifying pre-existing versions of either the music, or lyrics, or both.
The modern interpretation of the note runs at the beginning of several sections (e.g. Section 1: 拂一至六) is generally to play them as individual notes rather than as a quick run: this is quite uncommon today. If in an early version these individual notes were each paired to a word, this might explain how this custom arose. However, in Sections 2 and 9 of the 1589 edition (as well as the others with lyrics that I have been able to examine) these notes are not clearly paired against characters: the pairing in some cases suggests no words on a note run, in other cases one or two words; in no case is there a word for each note.
This whole issue requires further research.
17.
Flower Drum Songs (花鼓歌 Huagu Ge)
18.
Dao Yi in Mei'an Qinpu (XXIX/213; "Wuyi tuning" not explained, but raised 2nd, 5th and 7th strings, as with
guxian diao)
Quite a few modern recordings are available. Of particular note is
this recording by Xu Lisun made in the 1950s.
19.
Dao Yi in Huangzhong Mode (raise fifth, lower first strings: 1 3 5 6 1 2 3)
20.
Ten Melodies of Mr. Qian (錢氏十操 Qianshi Shicao, 1880)
21. Qingshang Modal Prelude (清商調 Qingshang Diao); listen; QQJC VII/217)
In 1609 Qingshang Diao does not come just before Dao Yi. Instead it comes near the end, just before the melody Feiming Yin (which also has lyrics, unlike in 1425), so one might think it is intended as a modal prelude for that piece, but there is significant evidence to suggest it will combine better with Dao Yi.
The reasons to pair Qingshang Diao with Dao Yi include,
These factors suggest that perhaps these lyrics, and thus the prelude itself, might better relate to Dao Yi than the 1609 Fei Ming Yin (which also has lyrics).
Zha Guide 30/236/442 lists it in four handbooks:
Note that this melody was not in the 1589 edition, making its intention somewhat more problematic.
This melody, except that the last line (the harmonic closing) is actually much like the one in 1525b, is rather different, having 13 notes instead of 8, thus allowing the lyrics to fit by normal pairing.
22.
Original preface
In couplet in the middle of this preface is half of an "old poem" by 王昌齡 Wang Changling (ca.690 - ca.756) called Boudoir Lament (or: Lady's Chamber Lament, 閨怨 Gui Yuan; compare lyrics under Gui Yuan Cao). The full poem is:
23. Dao Yi music (1589; (QQJC VII/129ff)
On the other hand, the tablature in the 1589 edition is clearly written with few obvious errors. Nevertheless, the tablature style at the time causes some problems with potential non-pentatonic notes, in particular the fact that in this handbook positions between the
hui are indicated only as "half"; problems with this are mentioned elsewhere. Note also that for some reason in the 1609 edition called
Qinpu Hebi the final three lines of Section 9 have completely different tablature from that of the 1589 edition. The 1589 version is odd but playable; the 1609 seems to be garbled.
As with Daoyi Qu there are some copying errors that complicate interpretation of this melody.
24.
1589 Dao Yi section titles
00.00 1. 感時興思 Gǎn shí xīng sī
1589 Dao Yi lyrics
(二)
(三)
(四)
(五)
(六)
(七)
(八)
(九)
(十)
(十一)
(十二)
To my knowledge there are have been no recordings or transcriptions of this 1609 version other than my own.
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The commentary on this that I have seen is by Yan Xiaoxing: 嚴曉星,《「搗衣」作者潘庭堅考》,發表於2010年第6期《書品》, which quotes correspondence with 李楓 Li Feng). It in particular suggests that this melody as played in Mei'an Qinpu has the flavor of flower drum songs.
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There is extensive discussion and a transcription (without tablature) in Fredric Lieberman, A Chinese Zither Tutor, p.131ff. It translates the Mei'an afterword (not in Zha Guide), which describes the woman thinking of her 親人 husband/lover "河畔搗衣時 while pounding cloth by the river". This has led some commentators to interpret "pounding clothes" as washing them in the river. There are nearly identical versions of the melody at least two other handbooks:
Said to be proto-Meian; 8th melody; no commentary
Said to be early Lingnan School; calls tuning
taicou
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A transcription of this melody as played by 龍琴舫 Long Qinfang is in
Guqin Quji I, pp.260-264 (commentary on p.9); it has 8 sections. There is also a recording. It is said to follow the melody of this name composed by 錢壽占 Qian Shouzhan, and to be in the collection of Qian's melodies in Qianshi Shi Cao. However the version of that handbook in QQJC (XXIV; see next footnote) does not seem to have it.
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This is presumably the same handbook as the Qin Handbook of Qian Shouzhan, 10 Melodies (錢壽佔琴譜十操 Qian Shouzhan Qinpu Shicao published in
QQJC XXIV). Note that the name 錢壽佔 Qian Shouzhan is written 錢壽占 with the Dao Yi in Guqin Quji, and 錢綬詹 in Xu Jian's Outline History (see under
Tianwen'ge Qinpu). Guqin Quji attributes the melody to Qian, but the melody is not included in this handbook (see previous footnote).
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清商 18003.383-388 includes 清商曲歌詞, the title of
Section 6 (Folios 44-51) of the
Yuefu Shiji. There are no references here for 清宮 qinggong, 清徴 qingzhi or 清羽 qingyu, but 18003.149 清角 qing jue has a story from the 後漢書劉昆傳 biography of
Liu Kun in the Latter Han History that says Liu Kun knew a qingjue melody (more
under Shi Kuang).
1670 (no: = GX; again see
comment in
chart)
1692
1722
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The original Chinese preface is:
忽見陌頭楊柳色,悔教夫婿覓封侯。
In her boudoir seldom is a woman unaware of anxiety,
as on spring days she vacantly gazes into the makeup mirror in her elegant pavilions.
Suddenly she sees at the top of the lane the color of poplars and willows,
and regrets having advised her husband to seek enfeoffment.
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The calligraphy for the section titles were very hard to read: thanks to 孫小青 Sun Xiaoqing for helping me read them. They were not not copied in the Zha Guide, perhaps because they were not included in the 1609 edition).
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The original section titles and their pronunciation are as follows (with timings following my recording 聽錄音):
00.37 2. 對月懷情 Duì yuè huái qíng
01.32 3. 音信杳然 Yīn xìn yǎo rán
02.12 4. 遙悲旅况 Yáo bēi lǚ kuàng
02.45 5. 時變授衣 Shí biàn shòu yī
03.21 6. 夢統邊關 Mèng tǒng biān guān
04.05 7. 歷叙離愁 Lì xù lí chóu
04.49 8. 竊嘆參商 Qiè tàn shēn shāng
05.15 9. 塞北凄涼 Sài běi qī liáng
05.58 10. 恨春山壓 Hèn chūn shān yā
06.45 11. 遠寄征袍 Yuǎn jì zhēng páo
07.40 12. 勒憅麟閣 Lēi tòng língé yōu
08.05 泛音 (harmonic closing, still with lyrics)
08.23 曲終 (melody ends)
These lyrics (not yet translated) are paired to the tablature by the standard pairing method in all 12 sections. These lyrics are as follows (note inserts of 7x4 poems in sections 7, 8, 9 and 10; there are more in sections 11 and 12, which seem to have been taken from 1539 Dao Yi Qu, except as noted):
秋風起,碧雲飛,胡草萋萋胡馬嘶。征人邊塞,妻守在深閨。鴛鴦被冷羞金猊,把那玉關望斷信音稀。寤寐反側思君也,惟盼五更雞。寒到君身妾搗衣,搗衣、搗衣、復搗衣,愁聞孤鴈過,聲嘹嚦,惜羣離。
寶瑟空閑,衰顏暗度易星霜。惆悵望天將暝,明月上東山。秋寂寂,雲樹茫茫,冒昏黃,晝夜裏費思量。憶别時,經幾度寒暑,心獨苦,而兩處繫柔腸。巫山巫峽,朝雲暮雨,無夢到高唐。桃源仙路杳,何處問劉郎。
凝眸不見青鸞信,何曾有黃犬音,自沉吟。無端仙籟,吹落江城。月淡淡,路泠泠,歌殘樊素,病淚西傾,夫重封侯,妾視輕。寄一行書信,天涯何處覓形踪,令我悔恨無窮。
胡月冷千峰難辯,情思難禁。月圓月缺,照人孤零。黃花時節碧雲天,獨擁寒衾。展轉不知身入夢,愁那他鄉旅邸無親,相結誰是同心。
向西樓搗衣,樓前有流水,比相思,無了無期。只見秋風禾黍,征人未有衣。鴻雁過樓頭,幽人寂寂。又見鷺羣洲畔,芳草萋萋。何日裏,將軍歸故里,方得破愁眉。
搗衣搗衣復搗衣,搗到更闌夜分時。片時在枕上,魂飛度關山,忽到邊城,又到帝畿。自嘆良人生别,徒傷悲,《鳳凰臺上憶簫吹》。簫聲冷落樓臺,雁字來稀。秋水清徹骨,難禁那蟋蟀啾啾喞喞在窗西,孤誤鶩傍雲飛。
巾笄兮,托終身。(重二句)只「韋布家風敢厭貧,羽檄暮從西府出,君身朝向北梁尋,鴛鴦被冷芳心結。」雙風釵閑,空憶洞房春。想得春來夏又,山頭火暎,寒潭水幽畫角迎風。端緒樓頭,離情無限,都逐水中流。
壯士揮戈向朔方,兩處各參商。「病魂終夜尋消息,良遇隨更自玉張。湘水豈能流妾恨,楚雲徒爾為君忙。」竚立凝眸望,落月寒光滿屋梁。
只見銀花盡落,又聽促織悲鳴。砧聲何急,離思難禁。征人入虜深,甲中蟣虱,單絮連生。髮上胡霜,想已星星。「妾身未得那明花帳,邊月徒勞照錦衾。良夜每爭玄鶴夢,斷魂常賦《白頭吟》,」誰為釋羽林。
夫君,迆(辶里)受降城。悶倚西樓,玉燕橫橫。「鎖鑰不開魂腕力,邊疆纔到月三更。斷霞流水添行色,參杵清鍾雜櫓聲。」九天寒氣匐逼人醒。鎖盡眉峰,數盡殘更。廣陵消息無憑,十年笑語嗟空生。無限事,玉關情,烟杪暮砧頻。
搗衣,搗衣,復搗衣, 搗到更深月落時。
臂弱不勝砧杵重, 心忙惟恐那搗聲遲。
妾身不是商人妾, 商人貿易東復西。
妾身不是蕩子婦, 寂寞空房為誰苦。
Comparing the 1539 lyrics, 1589 Dao Yi ends Section 11 by changing 苦 to 守 (shou: protect [herself]), then adding:
砧聲急,淚如雨,搗衣復搗衣,衣成矣。 Block sounds urgent, tears like rain, pound cloth, pound it again, until the clothing is ready.
收拾寄寒衣,莫教衣到遲。 Prepare for sending cold(-weather) clothing, cannot allow the clothing to be late.
妾夫為國戎邊頭, 黃金鎖甲的那跨紫騮。
從渠一去三十秋, 死當廟食生封侯。
如此別離尤不惡, 年年為君搗衣與君著。
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